흠...저가 쓴건데요.. 아직 다 쓰진않앗는데 쓰다만거 좀 봐주세요.. 조언&문법 틀린것좀 고쳐주시면 정말 ㄳㄳ하겠습니다. Leadership Essay Outline Background and Introduction to topic: In the past to the present, a lot of scientist had borned and they had invented a lot of epoch-making inventions. Some of the inventions left as necessary to human society, and one of the inventions is a 'light bulb' by 'Thomas Elva Edison'. In addition, Thomas Elva Edison had also invented many useful inventions, such as 'stock ticker', 'Kinetoscope', and 'Vitascope', and he had became known as "The Wizard of Menlo Park, New Jersey", where he lived. Thesis: He was a great inventor and leader, and he oughts to win respect from people as he had marked an epoch in human society. Arguments (3 characteristics of leadership): 1. He was an enthusiastic leader. 2. He was a dependable leader. 3. He was a 뭐할지 못골랐음..(listener,action-oriented,educated,reslts-based 중 하나 추천좀) Body: In many ways, He shows up as a great leader. Argument One Topic Sentence (NOT an example or quote) First of all, he was an enthusiastic leader. Support: He had gave his life to the invention as he got 1093 patents of his inventions. Source: Internet Support: He sold candy and newspapers on trains running from Port Huron to Detroit for making money for his experiment. Source: Internet Second, he was a dependable leader. -> -> Third, he was a -> -> 암것도도 모르면서 'had + 과거' 를 막 썼는데... 어떤가요? 역시 틀렷나요?-.- 아 그리고 에디슨이 dependable한 이유....-.- 아시는분...아놔  찾아야하는데